Review of Content and Organization of an Speech About Climate Change

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Hi Cianna,
You chose an interesting topic. The world is currently under the threat of climate change, mainly due to human activity. If the trend continues, it endangers the survival of living things, a reason that calls for robust activism. This is the first interesting factor of your content. The supporting points for your speech are up to date too. The introduction is content-rich, especially because you begin by quoting a report from the union of concerned scientists. It helps the audience reflect on the effects of climate change beyond the two reasons of displacement of people and rise in conflict. However, I feel the supporting content is a bit shallow, leaving out crucial details. You mentioned transport as one of the factors leading to climate change in the world. Please include specific statistics about the contribution of the transport sector in aiding climate change. For instance, you could cite t...