Lake Ontario's Pollution Problems and Recommendations

Process for in-class peer feedback on draft instructions
YOUR NAME: ________________________________________
YOUR Colleague’s Name:
* Choose a partner.
* Using SQ3R, read and review your partner’s draft.
* As you peer review your partner’s work, fill in the document below. It would be a good idea to have the assignment open in front of you as you work through this peer review process. Remember that you are working to support your colleague as he/she/they revise and improve their own work to best meet the requirements of the assigned task.
* The final step is to write a reflective piece.
* Save your file as a Word or PDF, using the professional naming convention as discussed in class.
* Submit your final review to Moodle and email to your partner.
Peer Review Process – Some Guiding Prompts and Questions

Feedback and suggestions (enter your responses here, bullet points are fine)

First impressions:
* Appearance?
* Does the Feasibility/Recommendations Report the three taskfor the assignment?
* Is it easy to follow?

The feasibility/recommendations report follows the required format and is easy to understand.
The feasibility/recommendations report the three tasks for the assignment and technical background of the issue of Lake Ontario’s pollution problems.
There are headings, and the ideas in the subsections link to the main topic.

Survey and scan:
* Is it easy to see important information?
* Does the language look straightforward?
* Is it concise?

All the important information is included in the paper from the need to address Lake Ontario’s pollution problems and recommendations.
The language is straightforward, concise, and does not include jargon.

Read the draft:
* Is the information relevant and to the point?
* What kind of tone is used? Is it appropriate?
* Does the draft speak to the audience? If not, what can you suggest?
* Are sentences clear and reasonably free of serious grammar errors?

The information focuses on Lake Ontario’s pollution problems and solutions to address this.
The tone is formal and informative, which is appropriate when writing reports.
Yes, the draft addresses the target audience and proposes solutions to deal with Lake Ontario’s pollution problems.
The sentences are clear, and there is a use of transitions, while the content is free o...