Term Paper on the Invisible Man and the Great Divorce

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Virginia Woolf once said that“ All the being and the doing, expansive, glittering, vocal, evaporated; and one shrunk, with a sense of solemnity, to being oneself, a wedge-shaped core of darkness, something invisible to others.” There is a definition for invisible, a transparency figure who is able to witness others. The invisibility portrayed by C.S Lewis and Ralph Ellison both represented the disappointment or regret of the choices that the character had been made.
In the novel, Invisible Man, after disappointments and disappointments, the narrator decided to become invisible. The disappointments created the invisible man. When Ellison invented his Invisible Man, he simply brought this disappearance into the open. Color threatens to annihilate his individuality, so he gets rid of it -- gets rid of appearance altogether.(Rosenblatt) In the book, invisible man, after the the narrator took Norton to the old slave center, Mr. Norton passed out. The African American Dr. Bledsoe, however, is a follower of white supremacy, blames the narrator with all his faults. Furthermore, Bledsoe wrote those “recommendation letters” to remain narrator unemployed. Unfair treatments received from other white people, the narrator never loses his hope. There are four communities narrator had been involved with, Liberty Pants Plant, Brotherhood. In this strong racism society, the narrator tries to define himself with higher value than others. Through his college experiences, he believed racial prejudices can be solved. After he joined Brotherhood, he continues his fighting. However, he later found out he had been used as a token for a complex purpose. Ultimately, he figures out the only way to get rid of racial prejudice is to become invisible, since racial definition is given by other people. He eventually believes the final solution to racism is to emerge underground. He sets himself up in a hidden section of an apartment-house basement. He plays Louis Armstrong records. He strings 1,369 light bulbs around his room; the glare gives shape to his invisibility. And from there he looks at the country that will not see him(Rosenblatt).
In order to redempt for their life, the ghosts in the Great Divorce needs to be invisible. Orthodoxy prevails in the case of the Episcopal Ghost: To be saved, he must repent of his intellectual sins and express belief in the Resurrection, a literal heaven and hell, and the existence of God. In the novel, the grey town represents the hell, and the bus represents the way to redempt their sins in order to go to heaven. In the novel, we follows several ghosts, tousle-headed poet who professed Communist whose rough life, including personal and professional rejection, led him to commit suicide by throwing himself under a train, fat, clean shaven man man unwilling to abandon his intellect for his faith who meets Dick, well-dressed female ghost who ashamed of her appearance and transparency and doesnt want to be seen. scared by unicorns(Lewis). Through the journey with those ghosts, we understand the reasons for the deaths are various. However, when they become the ghost, the after-life, with a refresh mind and invisible figure, they are willing to redempt for their sins which can’t be redempt if they are not invisible. Finally, it turns out in order to go to heaven, you must have a strong faith believe God’s love and judgement. The Great Divorce is portrayed as a christian’s doctrine by many scholars.
In the both books, the narrator tries to find an ultimate solution to their individual matter. In the Invisible Man, the ultimate solution is to become invisibility. The narrator tries to find his own way, solution, to racial prejudice. After many disappointments, becoming invisible becomes the only solution for him. He says he is invisible, not because he is really invisible, but others are blind. The ultimate solution in the Great Divorce is to redempt their sins in order to leave the Grey Town.. In The Great Divorce, to enter the kingdom of Heaven ghosts are repeatedly told that all they need to do is accept God and let go their previous selfish interests. (Giussani 18) To be saved, he must repent of his intellectual sins and express belief in the Resurrection, a literal heaven and hell, and the existence of God. (Ellison) According to the title, The Great Divorce, we can tell Lewis tries to bring a strong contrast between hell and heaven. The Ghosts have to find their own ideology in order to go to the heaven. The Hard-Bitten Ghost who is a depressed pessimist with his head sunk in conspiracy theories and an allergy to responsible engagement with the world; The Bishop Ghost who plays at theological games and aren’t be bothered with anything so simple as childlike faith; two female Ghosts who have spent their earthly lives attempting to control their loved ones and who take offense that God will not ultimately give them ‘possession’ of others’ wills and souls; All of those ghosts had been struggled to believe the heavenly testimony of the goodness of the God. They suspect God’s love and his justice. However, there is a rule and definition for heaven and hell. There will be consequences for the choice that character make.
Invisible is able to hide the identity the person is while still be able to witness the world in his own way. The Great Divorce teaches us people can’t go to heaven is not they are not strong enough to do so, but the heaven is too bright. The only way to go to the heaven is to surrender to yourself. The process of this is invisible. The invisible man, the narrator figure out the only solution to racial prejudices is to become invisible, not himself really invisible, but others are blind. The invisible in the Invisible Man represent the disappoint, racial identity during the civil rights movement. The invisible is the result of disappointments.
Citation:
Lewis, C.S. The Great Divorce. New York: HarperCollins edition, 2001. Preface, p. x. (Original publication – Great Britain: G. Bles, 1946.)
Giussani, Fr. Luigi. Is It Possible to Live This Way? Volume 1 – Faith. Montreal: McGill-Queen’s University Press, 2008.
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Rosenblatt, Roger. "Lives Well Lived: Ralph Ellison; Prescience, In Black and White." Lives Well Lived: Ralph Ellison; Prescience, In Black and White. The New York Times, 1 Jan. 1995. Web. <https://www(dot)nytimes(dot)com/books/99/06/20/specials/ellison-lives.html>.