Business Communication Assignment Business & Marketing Essay
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Part 1 Formal Letter Assignment:
The Formal Letter in the black frame. On the left side outside the frame, you find the number for each line of the letter. Just refer to the line number(s) in your answers / add the line number(s) to you your answer.
- Identify 4 errors in the page format/layout of this letter. Indicate the line number and keywords.
- 2. Sentence line #23-24 does not use you-attitude. Please rewrite the sentences using the correct you-attitude.
- Sentence line #19-21 does not use not use positive writing style (positivism). Please rewrite the sentences using the correct positive style.
- Sentence line #26-28 does not use a formal writing style or formal language. Please rewrite the sentences using the correct formal style or language.
Part 2: Policy Loophole Assignment
Due to covid-19 situation, most of the universities started offering online education. However, as the covid-19 situation is relaxing, some universities have decided to going back to face to face classes next semester. Imagine that a policy was announced to inform that all classes at a University, starting in winter term, will resume to face-to-face study on campus.
“Starting from the next semester, until further notice, all courses will resume face to face on campus. In order to ensure the continuity of education for all students, the subjects with the enrolled students who cannot travel to country XYZ will also be conducted on-line through the University’s e-learning platform simultaneously. The e-learning platform will deliver full teaching and learning experience as with those on-campus class providing the same knowledge-building activities, learning outcomes and opportunities.”
- Identify 1 loophole in this current policy.
- Currently there is only one “process” written for this policy. Please write additional processes to get rid of the loophole you mentioned in the previous question.
The Formal Letter in the black frame. On the left side outside the frame, you find the number for each line of the letter. Just refer to the line number(s) in your answers / add the line number(s) to you your answer.
1 Identify 4 errors in the page format/layout of this letter. Indicate the line number and keywords.
1 The positioning of the signature in lines 30 to 35. It is placed in the right where it should have been placed in the left
2 The capitalization of the salutation in line 12. It should not be all caps, but should have been capitalized only.
3 The addition of the Telephone number field in line 10. There’s no need to indicate the recipient’s number in that part of the heading.
4 The addition of the name ‘Chantel Taylor’ at the top of the page. There is no need to do that especially since the name is already provided at the signature portion.
2 2. Sentence line #23-24 does not use you-attitude. Please rewrite the sentences using the correct you-attitude.
5 I realized that the proper maintenance of woodchips or better yet, the use of rubberized surface could help improve the experience and usability of the playground. It would be best if we can work together and improve it.
3 Sentence line #19-21 does not use not use positive writing style (positivism). Please rewrite the sentences using the correct positive style.
6 For the children to interact with other children, it would be best to improve the playground conditions. This would not only help improve the children’s safety and experience, but would also require fewer resources such as handicapped parking spaces, curbs, and ramps.
4 Sentence line #26-28 does not use a form...
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