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Personal Statement: Exploring the Secret of Life

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The first attached document is the starting of my personal statement. Please help me to edit it and continue to make up the personal statement.
For the first paragraph, you need to write why I want to choose biology as my major for my undergrad study.
Second paragraph, I want to write: after the earthquake, saving lives is the first responsible for everyone. I want to become a useful man in this world to save lives, but I dont want to study medicine. You need to talk about why I dont want to study medicine in this paragraph, just 2 sentences is OK. [In this paragraph, I want to focus on my love and my major.]
The third paragraph talked I am not a good student. I do not have very good grades. Until I met my Biology teacher, he let me fall in love with biology. I got the best grade in this course at the end of semester (top1). [In this paragraph, I want to focus on my academic growth which is based on interests. However, interest is the solid foundation of success. You also need to write this paragraph like a story.]
The next paragraph, I want to write I have strong hand-on skills and cooperative ability. I was a member of a group. This group prepared to make the robot. How to make the robot. We need to do programming and spell Lego Bricks. Creating a robot which can follow a specific route to reach the terminus. We got team award in this provincial competition. I am the group leader. [You also need to create a short story to focus on hand-on skills and cooperative ability. Biology is based on experiment, so strong hand-on skills is great in this major]
The last paragraph you need to conclude all the paragraph and write why I am suitable for learning biology.

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Personal Statement
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Life is beautiful. Exploring the secret of life makes our life even more beautiful. When I was young, I heard this sentence countless times. Recently I heard the same on a TV program named Discovery. I liked to touch small animals and plants and listen to them because I thought they had their specific souls and minds. Because of my strange behavior, my friends always thought I was a freak. I was not a great man; I didn’t have some especially ambitious goals. It has just dawned on me that at the moment, I can make my own choices; choose the University I want and the major. I hope I can study Biology merely to satisfy personal curiosity.
On May 12th, 2008, the worst earthquake in the past decades struck Sichuan Province, China. I lived in Xi'an and strongly felt the tremor. I was eight at the moment the earthquake occurred. I had no other thoughts at that afternoon, just anxiously waited for my mom. I missed her very much. Her work left me with the impression that when a disaster occurs, the word that bore weight "assistance." That meant that she had to leave to go to the area of the incidence. Every TV channel reported that the deaths and missing persons continued to rise.
I felt very scared that my mom would never return. I could not fall asleep that night. Two days later, my mom went to the frontier line of this disaster. Before she left, I begged her to take me with her. When we boarded the rescue aircraft, I wished my mom could hold me. Most buildings were razed in worst-hit areas with so many people, including school students, buried underneath the ruins. Only a few teachers and students escaped.
The casualties were so many, and I felt like if I were in a better position, I would have been a useful man. I would have saved lives. Unfortunately, I couldn't. I had no skills. At the same time, I never wanted to be a doctor. So I looked at other ways in which I could be useful, I thought I would still do better in the field of biology. I didn’t want to do medicine because I lacked the passion. I felt like medicine is too hard and demanding. Simply because biology is somehow directly linked to life, I would still be useful.
I may not have professional skills in Biology (something I am seeking), but I have hands-on skills. Besides, I can work collaboratively in teamwork to bring out something useful. To support this fact, I once worked with a group of people whom we prepared to make a robot. In order to make the robot, we required to be conversant with programming and spell Lego Bricks. The robot was supposed to follow a specific route to reach a terminus. So as a team we worked together and put on all our ...
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