Final paper. Urban design. Visual & Performing Arts

According to the following comment about your last time outline writing, and then write a 3 page final paper =. Sources at least 8
Central thesis examines race in an innovative way and is clear and understandable (10/15 points): There are two main issues with your thesis. First, your research does not account for race in any substantive way. As a result, you are only addressing one-half of the themes required for a 'Race and Place' course. And second, most of what you write about has already been discussed by previous authors. As a result, you are merely producing a book report of past research instead of developing a unique reading of the topic.
In order to address race in your work, you need to explore the critical importance of Hadid's Middle Eastern background on her work. You begin to do this by referencing her interests in translating the formal principles of Arabic calligraphy to architecture, but do not develop it fully in your research paper outline.
Each section of the outline builds upon the thesis statement (20/30 points): As I stated above, your thesis statement does not address race. As a result, this theme is not currently present in your outline. In order to reverse this oversight, you should produce more of a summary of her Middle Eastern background and of the ways that Hadid has explicitly addressed this part of her ancestry in interviews, journals and monographs.
Bibliography sources all relevant to subject (as demonstrated by annotations) (20/30 points): You need to add some bibliographical sources on the Middle East and on Arabic calligraphy in order to make a critical reading of Hadid's design for the BMW Central Building. There is at least one journal article that addresses the relevance of Hadid's Middle Eastern and Arabic background to her design work: https://www(dot)newyorker(dot)com/magazine/2009/12/21/the-abstractionist.