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Ideal Place to Identify Musical Sounds

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Here are the three main problems right now: 1) This one's easy to fix: you're talking too much about things that aren't sound and have nothing to do with sound (for example, the whole first paragraph). Cut these out! It's okay to include some details other than sounds to help the listener know where they are, but these should be very brief. 2) When you do talk about sounds, you're not describing them very vividly at all. In fact, you're not even identifying where they come from. Often times you just say that you hear "a sound"--what is making the sound? What is it like: high or low pitches? What kind of timbre? Is it loud or soft? You describe paper moving and making a "specific sound," but your words don't tell us what that sound is like, so the reader isn't able to experience what you are hearing. 3) I'm often very confused about where exactly you are, and who is around. Are you walking up and down a hallway, or sitting still? Which sounds come from where? Who is the man you keep mentioning? You want to be very clear in your writing with all of this, so that your reader (who gets to join you on your journey as they read your essay) knows where *they* are, too. One good way to fix Problem #3 is to include yourself in your writing: "I am sitting on a couch... Now I'm walking down the hall..." etc. And each time you tell us *where* you are, then you can describe in good detail all the different things you hear when you are in that place. That will be much clearer for your reader.
Please listening the file. in the beginning there is a sound of guitar and walking steps, and then come up with the piano sound. Maybe turn up the volume, you may can hear it clearly.

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Sound Mapping
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While sitting in this spacious area, one will definitely feel relaxed. Peace and quietness are present everywhere in the hall. The silence is not just about the person (me) who is sitting on one of those two blue sofas, but about those whiteboards with pictures of different people especially the youngster. Three rows have been devoted to photographs, and three contain some printed pages, meaning a total of six rows. If you check the photo, you will feel that the hall is air-conditioned since I am sitting calmly and checking some text messages on my mobile phone. The fact is that I am happy with the natural air. The room is so clean and neat that every small movement can easily be magnified. More specifically, that grey carpet looks too clean and hygienic, making me feel that even a tiny particle of dust will be visible on it. In all these things, the background music is certainly a plus point. Furthermore, the light is dim, but I was still able to see things clearly.
The sound that is smooth and audible will suit this situation the most. It does not travel far; instead, it leaves a good impression on me. Some of the listeners might not be able to understand what is going on since the nodes go up and down throughout. At some places, I find no sound, and at the others, there comes a couple of noises one after the other. As far as the hall is concerned, the door present on the left side seems to have been shut down due to a particular reason. Maybe, there is someone inside the room doing something secretly. If you happen to sit here for long, you will get to know that there are persistent voices: a large-sized pendulum clock ticks every second, and when the air blows, those white papers begin moving and creating a specific sound that you might have never heard before. The fan itself is making noise, but that is not as annoying as many people might think it to be. If you pay close attention to the overa...
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