Case Study Project--Revised Draft

Case Study Project--Revised Draft
For this revised version of your case study project, you will focus on using paragraphing and transitions to improve the coherence and flow of your ideas. In addition, you will review the feedback that you have received on your first draft (from your instructor, peer review, or self-review), and you will make revisions and edits based on your goals.
With your revised submission, you will include responses to three reflection questions. They are not part of your essay and are to be answered separately in the "comments" box of the assignment folder.
Paragraphing and Transitions
Include paragraph breaks where the focus of the information shifts from one idea to the next
Include words/phrases that show relationships between ideas within paragraphs
Include words/phrases that connect paragraphs and indicate how the ideas are linked from one paragraph to the next
Format
You will track the changes from your first draft so that your instructor can easily identify where you made revisions.
Use strikethrough to indicate areas that should be deleted.
Use bold-face to indicate areas where you are adding content.
Reflection Questions
The reflection questions are to be answered separately. (They are not part of the essay.) Post these in the "comments" box when submitting your assignment. You can number your answers or write the in paragraph form. Be sure to address all three questions.
Which areas of feedback did you choose to address in your revised version and why?
How did you address this feedback in your revised version?
Which areas of feedback did you choose not to address in your revised version and why?
Due Date and Grade Percentage
This is the culminating assignment, where you will tie together all of the information and ideas from the course.
All of the reading, writing, thinking, and discussing that you have done over the past several weeks have led up to this assignment.

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