Analysis of the Short Story "When the Grizzlies Walked Upright"

Analyze the Development of a Story
Write an essay in which you analyze and evaluate the development of a story from the readings. The essay should be 1-2 pages in length, typed, double spaced, using Times New Roman font, size 12. Please save as a Word document and submit as an attachment to be graded.
- Explain which story you chose and briefly summarize the plot.
- Identify key choices the author made in writing the story. For example, consider where the story is set, how the action is ordered, or how the characters are introduced and developed.
- Analyze the impact of the author's choices, discussing how these decisions affect both the story's meaning and the reader's experience.
- Organize your ideas so that each new idea builds on the one it follows to create a unified whole.
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Grading Rubric
CATEGORY
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Topic (content)
Focuses on a specific character, clearly expresses how character development contributes to theme, is fully supported by specific evidence from text.
Focuses mainly on a specific character, expresses how character development contributes to theme, is somewhat supported by specific evidence from text.
Focuses mainly on a specific character, somewhat expresses how character development contributes to theme, is somewhat supported by specific evidence from text.
Struggles to focus on a specific character, does not clearly express how character development contributes to theme, contains little or no supportive evidence from text.
Sequencing (Organization)
The paper follows a clear and logical train of thought and effectively uses transitions.
The paper follows a train of thought and uses transitions.
The paper follows a train of thought with some transitions.
The paper does not follow train of thought and fails to use transitions.
Voice/Style
Fully engages the reader, uses colorful language, strong tone, voice, point of view.
Engages the reader, uses colorful language, good tone, voice, point of view.
Somewhat engages the reader, sometimes uses colorful language, inconsistent tone, voice, point of view.
Rarely engages the reader, rarely uses colorful language, weak tone, voice, point of view.
Conclusion (Organization)
The conclusion is strong and leaves the reader with a feeling that they understand the writer's focus. Conclusion very effective and wraps up the narrative.
The conclusion is recognizable and ties up almost all the loose ends. Conclusion is somewhat effective to wrap up the narrative.
The conclusion is recognizable, but does not tie up several loose ends.
There is no clear conclusion, the paper just ends.
Grammar & Spelling (Conventions)
Writer makes no errors in grammar or spelling that distracts the reader from the content. Grammarly report and academic integrity statement are submitted.
Writer makes 1-2 errors in grammar or spelling that distract the reader from the content. Grammarly report and academic integrity statement are submitted.
Writer makes 3-4 errors in grammar or spelling that distract the reader from the content. Grammarly report OR academic integrity statement are submitted
Writer makes more than 4 errors in grammar or spelling that distracts the reader from the content. Neither grammarly report or academic integrity statement are submitted.
the story is when grizzlies walked upright/ page one
Before there were people on earth, the Chief of the Sky Spirits grew tired of his home in the Above World, because the air was always brittle with an icy cold. So he carved a hole in the sky with a stone and pushed all the snow and ice down below until he made a great mound that reached from the earth almost to the sky. Today it is known as Mount Shasta. Then the Sky Spirit took his walking stick, stepped from a cloud to the peak, and walked down the mountain. When he was about halfway to the valley below, he began to put his finger to the ground here and there, here and there. Wherever his finger touched, a tree grew. The snow melted in his footsteps, and the water ran down in rivers. The Sky Spirit broke off the small end of his giant stick and threw the pieces into the rivers. The longer pieces turned into beaver and otter; the smaller pieces became fish. When the leaves dropped from the trees, he picked them up, blew upon them, and so made the birds. Then he took the big end of his giant stick and made all the animals that walked on the earth, the biggest of which were the grizzly bears.Now when they were first made, the bearswere covered with hair and had sharp claws, just as they do today, but they walked on two feet and could talk like people. They looked so fierce that the Sky Spirit sent them away from him to live in the forest at the base of the mountain.
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Pleased with what he'd done, the Chief of the Sky Spirits decided to bring his family down and live on earth himself. The mountains of snow and ice became their lodge. He made a big fire in thecenter of the mountain and a hole in the top so that the smoke and sparks could fly out. When he put a big log on the fire, sparks would fly up and the earth would tremble. Late one spring while the Sky Spirit and his family were sitting round the fire, the Wind Spirit sent a great storm that shook the top of the mountain. It blew and blew and roared and roared. Smoke blown back into the lodge hurt their eyes, and finally the Sky Spirit said to his youngest daughter, “Climb up to the smoke hole and ask the Wind Spirit to blow more gently. Tell him I'm afraid he will blow the mountain over.”
As his daughter started up, her father said, “But be careful not to stick your head out at the top. If you do, the wind may catch you by the hair and blow you away.”
The girl hurried to the top of the mountain and stayed well inside the smoke hole as she spoke to the Wind Spirit. As she was about to climb back down, she remembered that her father had once said you could see the ocean from the top of their lodge. His daughter wondered what the ocean looked like, and her curiosity got the better of her. She poked her head out of the hole and turned toward the west, but before she could see anything, the Wind Spirit caught her long hair, pulled her out of the mountain, and blew her down over the snow and ice. She landed among the scrubby fir trees at the edge of the timber and snow line, her long red hair trailing over the snow.
There a grizzly bear found the little girl when he was out hunting food for his family. He carried her home with him, and his wife brought her up with their family of cubs. The little red-haired girl and the cubs ate together, played together, and grew up together. When she became a young woman, she and the eldest son of
the grizzly bears were married. In the years that followed they had many children, who were not as hairy as the grizzlies, yet did not look exactly like their spirit mother, either. All the grizzly bears throughout the forests were so proud of these new creatures that they made a lodge for the red-haired mother and her children. They placed the lodge near Mount Shasta—it is called Little Mount Shasta today. After many years had passed, the mother grizzly bear knew that she would soon die. Fearing that she should ask of the Chief of the Sky Spirits to forgive her for keeping his daughter, she gathered all the grizzlies at the lodge they had built. Then she sent her eldest grandson in a cloud to the top of Mount Shasta, to tell the Spirit Chief where he could find his long-lost daughter.
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When the father got this news he was so glad that he came down the mountainside in giant strides, melting the snow and tearing up the land under his feet. Even today his tracks can be seen in the rocky path on the south side of Mount Shasta. As he neared the lodge, he called out, “Is this where my little daughter lives?” He expected his child to look exactly as she had when he saw her last. When he found a grown woman instead, and learned that the strange creatures she was taking care of were his grandchil dren, he became very angry. A new race had been created that was not of his making! He frowned on the old grandmother so sternly that she promptly fell dead. Then he cursed all the grizzlies: “Get down on your hands and knees. You have wronged me, and from this moment all of you will walk on four feet and never talk again.” He drove his grandchildren out of the lodge, put his daughter over his shoulder, and climbed back up the mountain. Never again did he come to the forest. Some say that he put out the fire in the center of his lodge and took his daughter back up to the sky to live. Those strange creatures, his grandchildren, scattered and wandered over the earth. They were the first Indians, the ancestors of all the Indian tribes. That's why the Indians living around Mount Shasta would never kill a grizzly bear. Whenever a grizzly killed an Indian, his body was burned on the spot. And for many years all who passed that way cast a stone there until a great pile of stones marked the place of his death.