STEEPLED Analysis, Porter's Five Forces, and SWOT Analysis of ADNOC

-I wrote the paper once, and I failed I upload their note and named it ( marking notes), it help you see where is my mistakes. - My paper name is (final draft), I tried to re-write again. The ideas is in the paper, it just need fixing to make it more sense, and I need from you to help me present my paper in the best version. - In the document ( detailed instructor), there is a something called ( Command Words) if you can use in the assignment to get more marks it will be great. - I have some ideas and points so can write in a better way. -I uploaded the instructors and an example from student who passed the phase, so it can help more. - The paper limited words are 3200 max. - if you can make it shorter - I have some note if you can insert it in the paper in better, presentable way. - In paragraph ( STEEPLED Analysis), note: as a company we only deal with one tier it can cause a risk or threat because they can use child labor.It can affect reputation when they found it is unethical. And connect the recommendation with it. - Under the graph explain it Explain all tiers and their connection.Main contractor who deal with adnoc as adnoc we only engaging with the contractor it can be dangerous cause we aren’t dealing with the other tiers either we ask the contractor to provide the tiers name to make their searches or engage with all tiers. -We are as adnoc we only deal with the one contractor as the third party they might use child labor so it can affect the reputation we have to engage with all tiers to allow adnoc to make audit so they can know . Audit points to make sure all the parties involved are ethical. -In (STEEPLED Analysis) part social we can engage with university, My idea : Electrical vehicles everyday it develops, we can let students present their projects about electrical vehicles, and build a community and adopt the best idea, and award students with the best project this will increase the Social for ADNOC company. - In the ( Technological ): As for the technological side electrical vehicles is evolving every day, we need to catch up with this field, and use the best technology or otherwise we will be out of the market. - SEMI condatior is a threat because it wont available everyday as everything is online -Connect electric vehicles with ADNOC company in all the table, -in (Porters Five Forces ) Check the comments we must focus of 3 points. Also, ADNOC have a good branding name. -in (Potential Entrants): we can see it as threat or opportunity and why study we make to lock visibility and comparing with loses alignment with government vision forinstance: the government want less carbon so ADNOC can make it better from this way. - in (Substitutes): ADNOC can make heavy vehicles instead of regular electrical cars and it risky because its new no one tackled the heavy vehicles field because it’s all about light weight electrical vehicles. - in (Suppliers): Power of suppliers, the issue we don’t have a lot of suppliers regarding this field, so the risk is high if the supplier is limited, it will be only 2 or 3 major company so the power of suppliers is high. - Buyers: ADNOC is a powerful buyer, and the country is great for investment and expansion. - in ( Kraljic Matrix): High profit and low risk. it can affect ADNOC to produce electrical vehicles since everything is online it can delay in the phase I have to make the paragraph shorter and fix it, and I look for a references that say it will delay the production. - in (SWOT Analysis): Connect the ideas together - in (Conclusion ): Summarize everything we got - In (Recommendation): We need to engage all tiers for e.g: If ADNOC need plastic we can buy plastic from BUROOJ company, so it categorizes under company which is ADNOC, that We can use local company. We can say our recommendation either as bullet points or paragraph. Swot threats as ADNOC as recommendation what to do to switch to something positive. - For example: We can use tawzeen company since they make vehicles already and create a partnership with them and stay sustainability since there is no shipping from abroad. - get the case study in the paper if its deleted you will find in (first draft) document -fix table content and make sure all refences is used, and shorten the paper to 3200, we can insert the the paragraph under the table in to the table itself since the table not counted for instance in ( STEEPLED Analysis) i can insert the below paragraph directly in the table. See less