Review: Provide Substantive Content and Formatting Feedback

Reviewiseffectiveforboththewriterandthereviewer.Dependingonthewritingassignment, adult
Readers will review class content, as well as strengthen vital writing and close reading skills. Writers will recognize that good writing communicates effectively with diverse readers.
To remember while viewing:
Note: The least helpful comment to receive from a pee reviewer is"It looks good to me."
* First attend to Higher Order Concerns: thesis, audience ,purpose, organization, development(support)
* Then attend to Lower Order Concerns: sentence structure, punctuation ,word choice, spelling
* Make comments inspirit of helpfulness. Take comments in spirit of helpfulness.
Writer:
Reviewer:
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Congratulate

What does the writer do well in this assignment? (List one or more aspects.)Also, please write the writer's main claim or focus (thesis) according to what you have read. (It may not be the last sentence of the first paragraph-the traditional place for the thesis.)
The writer has been able to highlight the benefits of technology tools in improving accessibility and convenience of online education. Raymond’s main focus is the convenience of online education where students can access learning materials via cell phones, laptops and tablets.

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Ask clarifying questions

Whatpart(s) of the essay were abit confusing? Why?
In the second paragraph The writer points out that student increasingly aces learning materials using cell phones, but fails to state the extent to which this improves learning. The in text citation should not include the month or initials of the first name. For instance, Crotty, J. 14 Nov. 2012 should be cited as Crotty (2012).


What specific suggestions (3 or fewer) do you ha...