My Admission to the University of California

Admission Essay
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My admission to the University of California will not only be a success to the institution but myself as well. Before my admission, I am talented in various fields such as music and soccer. I am also passionate about keeping military dogs. This is my one unique personality that I know no one else is as passionate about it as me. Therefore, when I will join the University of California, I will be confident. I am super passionate about keeping military pets and am also talented in music and playing football and, therefore, I will help the school in Inter-university competitions as well as training my college colleagues on how to keep military dogs as pets since they require more care than the ordinary dogs.
During my first week of admission in high school, I strongly believed in myself and had the desire to lead a group of people. Contrary to the saying that leaders are made, I believed they are born. I was then given the responsibility of being in charge of my class. Despite the fact that I was so naïve and shy, it was inborn that I felt something which always reminded me that I could be a great leader. I, therefore, summoned the courage and took the responsibility of leading my class. Alongside my leadership quality, I was also among the best academically in our school and in one point I was the best in over twenty schools English competitions. Teachers nicknamed me “the professor.” Surely, I was really one. Soon than later, I undertook a community service event, in which, people were introduced into keeping pets, something, which many students had not taken seriously before. Since my friend’s brother had kept retired military dogs at their home, I had some litt...