Letter To Classmate: Recommendations for Essay

Dear [Name], Suggested Modifications for your Essay I am writing this letter to provide my analysis and recommendation of the paper you submitted earlier on the analysis of Hans Anderson's fairytale. I should applaud you for doing excellent work. You were able to adhere to the rules of professional writing as discussed in the course. For example, your work has a strong thesis statement. This is motivating as it informs the reader on the specific issue or areas you intend to focus on in the subsequent sections. Additionally, your body paragraphs address the issue identified in the thesis statement. I also noted that you used transitional words to link one paragraph to the next as seen in the third paragraph. This is good. However, there are few areas that I believe should be amended to better your work. I think you must have forgotten to add a concluding paragraph. A conclusion plays a critical role in an essay. It r...