Computing and Personal Statement

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My three major interests and passions are Art, Math and Computer science, and I believe that there is a creative fusion between all these disciplines. I engage wholeheartedly in these areas both in my school courses and out of school, and hope that I will be able to continue doing so on my chosen course and in the extra-curricular opportunities at university.

Art has quite naturally come to be my chosen field. I start to draw since very little, I would like to tag myself as a new media artist. My work utilizes digital tools to engage and unify a community with its participants in art., I begin projects by extensively researching the subject matters. For my graduation design, Enlighten me, I am making connection between using technology and my theoretical research. By using C language, and several 3D sensory cameras fixed to the ceiling in the Room, every person who walks into the 20 square meter space is recognized. As they move around "slowly", the light followed.   A major recent achievement of mine is the work as been selected to show around at least five exhibitions, received $5000 scholarship and cited once by the book “The Secret Life of Electronic Objects”.

I involve myself in the full life of the school and am pleased to have ways of passing on my enthusiasms to others. I have been appointed a Math Prefect, which involves running a weekly Math club, and also helping younger students in ‘work recovery’ sessions. I was also elected onto the School Council for 4 years in my previous school.

My passion for computer science has further developed after I start to work. I was delighted when I was given the opportunity to combine my art pursuits and computer interests by my employment for a commercial software company writing code for art projects..  After receiving a BFA in Art and technology from The Ohio State University Columbus, I joined Random international company in 2014. Where I was mainly responsible physical mechanical design, and support the development of the studio’s work.  In the process of exchanging idea with partners,  I gradually develop strong interest in the application of new technologies to create compelling experience. I start to enjoy reading about scientific and technological developments on the Internet and in newspapers and magazines.(add one example of using  IT knowledge for information system task) One Year of working experience made me want to study computer science at a higher level. I am eager to learn about artificial intelligence and the mathematical foundations of computing.  Have a background in electronics, software and engineering will help me to make use technology in my works to plays the role of bridging the tangible reality and imaginative world.

University of Melbourne has the top information system programs, where is the exactly nutritious study environment I am looking for.  I am ideally prepared to enroll in your graduate program, I hope to deepen and expand my knowledge of computing into areas which I have no formal experience of studying.