Challenges and Opportunities That Have Shaped Who I am Today
500-750 words. Was abandoned as a baby by mother as she was and still is a drug user. Dad along with family has helped raise him. He will be first in family to attend college. Has overcome anxiety and depression. Some dyslexia issues. Overcame public speaking through Jobs for American Graduates competitions to include nationals. Overcame selfworth. On the school Archery team for 7 years and has gone to state 4 times. Taught him to concentrate and focus. Has helped the community with church events, tutoring younger children and helped organize toy drives and Convoy of Hope for National dis. relief. Caroling for choir to nursing homes. Puts others first. Helps with younger siblings. Family almost lost home a few months ago due to finances. He is ranked in top 8% of his graduating class.
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My Story: Challenges and Opportunities that have shaped who I am today
I have had several opportunities and challenges which have shaped the person I am today. My experiences have toughened me up and sharpened my thinking and perspectives on most concepts in life. I have gained direction and resilience to pursue my goals and achieve them. I believe that if I am still alive, healthy, and kicking after all the challenges I have faced, then there is no obstacle I cannot overcome.
I had a tough childhood after I was abandoned by my mother, who was and is still a drug addict. I turned to my Dad and his family, who raised me to this level. Dad has struggled to raise a family of six with his single-stream income. In August, we nearly lost our home. As a sharp student, I have always excelled in my studies, which has made me the first person in my family to attend college. I have been ranked in the top 8% of my graduating class. Due to my academic excellence, my school nominated me to be president of the JAG program. Last year, I won state for my essay, which was a huge
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