America's Only Chance against Climate Change

America's Only Chance against Climate Change
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America's Only Chance against Climate Change
The writer has written on the need for America to focus on managing climate change by reducing its carbon footprint. Considering the fact that the essay is on how the use of renewable sources of energy can help the U.S in reducing its carbon footprint, then the topic has been tailored to create this notion. It is also interesting that the topic of the essay creates suspense and intrigues the reader to read on so as to understand the exact one change that the country has against climate change. In addition, the writer convinces me that there is a problem when he gives an overview of the trend of temperature increase in terms of degrees Celsius since the early 1900s, and attributes this change and increasing global warming to human activity.
The writer’s thesis clearly proposes a solution to the problem, although the thesis could be made more precise. I would say that the writer’s thesis is wordy, and it could be made shorter and more precise; modern technology and new laws on energy use can promote innovation while reducing carb...