Making Up Stories, In Dialogue: Barriers To Humanism

Making up stories, in dialogue
Three main character: a women, Andrew, Donn
They are all homeless people, and drug addicted
It should be like... All in dialogue conversation, but the language should be vivid. Can show the characteristic of three people, use some bracket to explain the verbal behavior.
women: Yes, if you can share the medicine you shooting up now, I can give you one of coat I picked up from the abandoned area.
Donna: Really? Will we have a warm cloth to wear? I prefer pink color like the nightshirts, reaching to the middle of the thigh. (she said brightly)
The form of storytelling
Three protagonists: a women, Andrew, donna
They are homeless people, and drug addiction
Like this .. the whole is a dialogue, but the language to enrich the three of them to reflect the character of their own use of parentheses to express speech
Women: Yes, if you can share the medicine you shooting up now, I can give you one of coat I picked up from the abandoned area.
Donna: Really? Will we have a warm cloth to wear? I prefer pink color like the nightshirts, reaching to the middle of the thigh. (She said brightly)
setting：
In an open market store, Andrew wakes up, holds a needle to his teeth for taking heroin. He seems shaky and nervous as he PASSes people in the streets and hardly talks to anyone when she bumps to Donna. Andrew stomach is cramping again, his friend Donna walks he down. Because of the chill weather, and Donna want to use the money they beg in the street to buy a warmer cloth. Andrew counts time after time but the amount is far from the price that they can get a cloth. When they are signing, a woman comes to them.
Making up stories, in dialogue
Three main character: a women, Andrew, Donn
They are all homeless people, and drug addicted
It should be like... All in dialogue conversation, but the language should be vivid. Can show the characteristic of three people, use some bracket to explain the verbal behavior.
women: Yes, if you can share the medicine you shooting up now, I can give you one of coat I picked up from the abandoned area.
Donna: Really? Will we have a warm cloth to wear? I prefer pink color like the nightshirts, reaching to the middle of the thigh. (she said brightly)
setting：
In an open market store, Andrew wakes up, holds a needle to his teeth for taking heroin. He seems shaky and nervous as he PASSes people in the streets and hardly talks to anyone when she bumps to Donna. Andrew stomach is cramping again, his friend Donna walks he down. Because of the chill weather, and Donna want to use the money they beg in the street to buy a warmer cloth. Andrew counts time after time but the amount is far from the price that they can get a cloth. When they are signing, a woman comes to them.