Plastic Surgery: Racial Self-Doubt or Pursuit of Better Self?
1. Revise according to my professor’s written comments.( in case you can’t understand her handwriting I typed down some of the hard-to-read comments and put them in the last page of my essay.)
2. Rewrite the beginning and ending to make them more meaningful. You don’t have to delete my whole beginning and ending just revise and add more( cause my prof believe that my beginning and end is too short) espeacially the ending she doesn’t want us to just restate and conclude the same idea but rather the leading it to a new level or bring up some new thoughts.( you can imitate the example essay I attached)
3.add some reflection and analysis each paragraph, or every 2 paragrph, just add it where you think needed. My prof thinks my essay have too much evidence and only Little analysis. You can read the example essay to get an idea of where to put analysis and how much analysis needed.
4. I will attach the basic requirement( grading rubrics) of this essay. Please pay attention to this when you revise it.
5. Change the format to MLA format
6.change some strange expression and grammar mistakes.
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