Natural Remedies: A Healthier Alternative to Menopause

Instructions
Outcomes:
1. Use a variety of rhetorical strategies and adapt to purpose, audience, and genre.
2. Demonstrate an understanding of critical thinking processes, such as summary, analysis, synthesis, and argumentation.
3. Use all components of the writing process such as invention, drafting, revision, editing, peer feedback, and self-assessment.
4. Demonstrate appropriate conventions of writing, especially appropriate citations and quotations in writing.
5. Develop effective written communication strategies and writing skills.
6. Apply proper standards of grammar and punctuation for professional communicationsAssignment
The culminating project in this course is to write a seven-page researched persuasive essay on a healthcare topic of interest. The important thing is that you are adding to the larger conversation regarding your topic.
The final seven-page essay will follow current APA style formatting guidelines.
The final paper will include:
* APA title page (1 page)
* Abstract (1 page)
* Essay body (4 pages)
* Introductory paragraph including the thesis statement
* body paragraphs (each on one topic, with a topic sentence and supporting sentences)
* conclusion
* APA reference list (1 page)
* The essay must include a minimum of five credible sources: at least three sources must be from the LIRN library. All sources used in the paper should be cited with in-text citations and listed in the reference list according to APA standards.
Format
Your final essay should be formatted in APA style, 7th edition, as taught throughout this course. Here are some basic guidelines:
1. Your essay should be saved as a Microsoft document (.doc or .docx). PDF or other formats will not be accepted.
2. Begin with the title page.
3. Use Times New Roman font, 12 pt., double-spaced throughout.
4. Your paper should include page numbers (upper right-hand corner).
See samples provided in this course and your APA manual for any other questions regarding formatting.
Turnitin.com and Source Use
*When you submit your assignment on Canvas, it will be automatically submitted to Turnitin.com. Turnitin.comis a plagiarism checker that is used to ensure that the student is submitting original work. It is the responsibility of the student to submit the assignment prior to the due date to ensure that all source use is cited and quoted properly. Assignments may be re-submitted as many times as needed, before the due date.
Hey thank you so much for writing my essay got a 97/100. Here are the professor's notes. if that would help.
thank you
*Notes*
the paper provides an informative review of why natural remedies could be a good alternative for women going through menopause. The paragraphs effectively focus on one main point and develop it with evidence. There is a need to strengthen the argumentative nature of the paper by persuading the target audience to take action because of the benefits of these remedies.
For example, if the target audience are women in menopause, are you urging them to ask their providers for alternative options? If the target audience is healthcare providers, do you have evidence they don't offer these remedies enough and are you persuading them to offer them more to their patients?
What might be a hook that is not a statement of fact that could grab the reader's attention?
how might you revise the thesis statement so that the phrase "this essay explores" can be removed?
how might you state instead what you learned in exploring alternative options for treating menopause and what you're persuading the target audience to do with this information?
you learned in expioring alternative options for treating menopause and what you're persuading the target audience to do with this information?
Then make sure each topic sentence provides an arguable claim that supports this persuasive thesis statement and is supported by the good evidence you have in the paragraphs.
Include a citable opposing point of provides an arguable claim that supports this persuasive thesis statement and is supported by the good evidence you have in the paragraphs.
Include a citable opposing point of view and counter it. This will make the paper argumentative as required instead of just informative