Review of Two Peer Proposals and Suggestions for Improvement

Draft Review
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Article 1: Analysis of High School Students' Perceptions Toward Vocational Careers: A Quantitative Study of Georgia High School Students
The proposal has a strong research topic. I believe that high school graduates are instrumental in the job market. It is essential to study the trends in how they perceive work. You have standard research language that uses study terminologies. However, you need to work on some issues. The first is on the methodology and design. The methodology is a fundamental aspect of a study because it informs how the research will be conducted (Willmott, 2020). You should give more details in this section detailing how you will conduct the study. You mentioned that you would use a Likert scale survey for your case. The second issue I believe you need to work on is the sample the research will use. It would be best if you were specific to ...