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The paper is well written in simple English that everyone should be able to understand. It responds to the questions posed. It is well presented with an introduction, body and conclusion. One glaring problem however is the lengthy sentences, punctuation and a few grammatical errors. On the second page for instance, the first sentence of the third paragraph can easily be broken into two to read, ‘The AKRO Tool Company is categorized as a specialty shop. There are outstanding factors that this corporation...’ On page 2, paragraph one, the second sentence has a missing full stop. Sentence 1 of the second paragraph on the same page has an unnecessary comma. The writer can try to make the sentences brief while being careful to avoid repetition.
The content is good and it shows that the writer did his research well. Some of the wordings however do not...