Complete these Questions for Peer Reviewers: Bioethics

Complete these Questions for Peer Reviewers
(Please answer all questions)
1 What do you find to be the strength of this essay?
Going through the essay, Kasey’s case is the main strength of the essay. Also, the quoted principles form strengths for the essay. Moreover, the thesis statement is strength of the essay, it is clear and prepares the reader on what to expect in the essay. This is well done.
2 What are two areas of the essay that can be improved? How?
The introduction part needs to be improved by first providing a short introduction by providing a general description of the problem and avoiding your own experience from the unit you are working. Secondly, is the conclusion which does not provide a summary to the major points of the paper. Therefore, you need to provide a summary of the major points rather than addressing a new concept at the conclusion.
3 What aspect of the writing could use the most attention during revisions (transitions, grammar, structure, word choice, etc.)?
There are a number of aspects that you need to focus on especially the transitions from one paragraph to another to provide a concise flow of ideas. Also, the grammar needs attention as well. Moreover, you need to come up with a clear structure that separates the case and moral ethical frameworks, the principles, the premises and arguments clearly. I think this will make the reading of your essay more enjoyable and easy to understand.
4 What do you find compelling or original?
The case that you have chosen and the principles are compelling. The fact that you have witnes...