Original Passage: Abraham Lincoln, John Brown, And The Civil War Era (Coursework Sample)
Answering questions and then paraphrase a passagesource..
PARAPHRASE ANALYSIS Each paraphrase you write must credit the source. Include the author's name and the page number (if there is one) where the passage was found. If you include the author's name in a signal phrase, then you only need the page number in the parenthetical citation. If you do not include the author's name in the paraphrase, you must include the author's last name and the page number in a parenthetical citation. If the source does not include an author's name, use the title of the article or a shortened version of the title.
The original passage beneath the Work Cited entry below is about America's sixteenth president, Abraham Lincoln. It is followed by two paraphrases--one incorrect and one correct.
Jones, Stephen B. Our Fiery Trial: Abraham Lincoln, John Brown, and the Civil War Era. Massachusetts UP,
1999, p. 65.
Nobody called him Abe--at least not to his face--because he loathed the nickname. It did not befit a respected professional who'd struggled hard to overcome the limitations of his frontier background. Frankly, Lincoln enjoyed his status as a lawyer and politician, and he liked money, too, and used it to measure his worth. By the 1850's, thanks to a combination of talent and sheer hard work, Lincoln was a man of substantial wealth. He had an annual income of around $5,000--the equivalent of many times that today--and large financial and real-estate investments.
INCORRECT PARAPHRASE No one used Lincoln's nickname, Abe, because he detested it. It didn't go with a lawyer and politician who had worked to get away from the restrictions of his country heritage. Lincoln liked his new position, and his wealth, and used it to gauge his status. By mid-century, his skill and labor had made him a fairly wealthy man. He had a yearly income of approximately $5,000 - equal to several times that now - and hefty business and land com
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