Effectiveness of Communication

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Effectiveness of Communication
Based on the feedback, I relayed the critical bits of information and the general idea that I was aiming to communicate. The reader was able to connect my argument as support to my claims about Cantor's struggle as a mathematician and his contribution to the theory of infinity.
Places where you did excellent work.
Places where a specific point could be better developed
The presentation of scholarly information by relating Cantor's ideas to concepts that Aristotle also studied or gave his opinion about is effective supporting details regarding the theory of infinity and mathematics, where Cantor is passionate about, which was mentioned in the feedback. The section about the mental breakdowns that Cantor was battling during the time also proves the theorem.
Based on the feedback, a better presentation proving that Cantor's events can be considered a "war" would help strengthen the paper. I also plan to improve by clarifying the fundamental ideas of what makes it a "war" with the other mathematicians.
The overall argument
I plan to present the evidence from research in a manner that will create a stronger argument. It will support my claim because although I already have the inform...