Essay Critiques (ENGLISH)

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Essay Critiques
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Essay Critiques
A good written material should be properly organized within the five basic elements of effective writing; focus organization, support and elaborations, style and conventions. The topic established by the author should be maintained all through without moving out of it because this will weaken the topic. Moving from one idea to the other within the material should be well organized and harmonized; there should be flow from one idea to the other.
The written material should have constancy; moving from the introduction, to body and to the conclusion. Each main point rose should be supported with relevant material and if possible give examples on the matter. Language used is very important and the audience should be considered when selecting the appropriate language to use. The language used should be well understood and relevant by the audience. Correctly formed sentences, their usage and where they are placed is very critical for a good written material.
An effective writer requires is to exercise good knowledge of appropriate writing style. This is achieved through understanding and putting in place the seven general elements in writing; you should be clear, concise, and able to enjoy precision, be consistent, accurate, check disciplinary expectations, and be honest. In addition, the work should be supported with other previous written works and their authors given credits through citation.
In the second essay, the writer stays focused on the topic he is discussing while in essay one he/ she moves to a broader topic. The writer of essay two has demonstrated a well organized work; with paragraphs that express one idea and the ideas are linked to one another as they focus on the main idea been addressed. The writer of essay one talks of many essays he/she has read however, no mention of the articles names or their authors. In effective writing, you should support your arguments with points from sources that can be identified and verified if necessary. The writer of essay number two has a high command language and its use. He/she uses a language that is well understood and his flow of ideas fro...