Peer Review for Manuscript. Health, Medicine, Nursing Book Review

A critical Manuscript Review
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The paper evaluates the effectiveness of virtual reality as a teaching and learning method. The manuscript clearly states the topic and purpose as the author focuses on the medical world giving an appropriate example of how it has benefited. The purpose is clear which is, how virtual reality is used to keep students engaged, interested, and actively participating in learning so as to improve their overall score. The introduction is well constructed and states the thesis statement at the end. Generally I found the introduction captivating as is provided me with an overview of what the paper is about and compelled me to read on.
The main strength of the paper lies in the relevance of the topic to today’s world of technology. The manuscript does a great job in examining the various benefits of VR in medicine. The author’s work is consistent showing coherence and flow from introduction to the conclusion. The key and sub points are clear and organized in a way to support each other and the thesis statement into a precise conclusion. The evidence and examples provided to support the points show that the manuscript was well researched. When evaluating the structure and format of the paper we found that the paper had a good flow from the introduction, literature review unto the conclusion. Each Paragraph is beneficial to...