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Feedback on the Essay About the Government Use of UCH

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Review the media piece "Peer Review Using Rubrics” found within the list of Topic 6 resources (to the right).
Follow the directions outlined in the media piece to complete this learning activity which is designed to provide practice using a rubric when peer reviewing a paper.
Review the first draft of the person who posted his/her first draft directly above yours in the Peer Review forum. If your draft is still the first student post at the top of the forum by Saturday, review the last draft posted at the bottom of the forum.
Complete the Peer Review Worksheet for the essay draft you reviewed.
Please submit the completed worksheet to two places.
As an attachment in a reply to your peer’s essay in the peer review forum.
As a normal assignment submission.
Review the criteria at the bottom of the Peer Review Worksheet to ensure successful completion of this assignment.

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Persuasive Essay: Peer Review Worksheet
Part of your responsibility as a student in this course is to provide quality feedback to your peers to help them improve their writing skills. This worksheet will assist you in providing that feedback. Submit this review as an attachment to both your instructor within the assignment bin and into your reply to your peer’s post containing the assigned draft.
Name of the Draft’s Author:
Name of the Peer Reviewer:
Summary
After reading through the draft one time, write a summary (3–5 sentences) of the paper. This should include the stance and the three sub-topics used to support the position within the essay. Do not place your own critique of the essay within this space.
-3810166675The paper's thesis suggests that the US government should implement UCH to lessen the spread of germs, increase the quality of life, and reduce social inequality. Accessible and affordable healthcare may enable earlier intervention and limit risks associated with the spread of germs. Moreover, the paper advocates that access to UHC would lead to everyone receiving medical treatment and the help they need at any cost. Furthermore, Social inequality is widely affected by the healthcare received across the globe. Generally, The nation's overall health would benefit from a system of UHC, and pandemics would not scar the nation as much as it has in the past.00The paper's thesis suggests that the US government should implement UCH to lessen the spread of germs, increase the quality of life, and reduce social inequality. Accessible and affordable healthcare may enable earlier intervention and limit risks associated with the spread of germs. Moreover, the paper advocates that access to UHC would lead to everyone receiving medical treatment and the help they need at any cost. Furthermore, Social inequality is widely affected by the healthcare received across the globe. Generally, The nation's overall health would benefit from a system of UHC, and pandemics would not scar the nation as much as it has in the past. 
 
 
 
 
 
Evaluate the Essay
After a second, closer reading of the draft, evaluate the essay using the Persuasive Essay: Final Draft rubric below. Determine the level of achievement appropriate for each assignment criteria. (Level of achievement ranges from Unsatisfactory to Target and are found at the top of the rubric. Assignment criteria are found in the left column of the rubric.). Please use the highlighting tool to score your peer within each criterion. Then use the right-hand side of the rubric to include a rationale with evidence and examples for the score.
Persuasive Essay Rubric
Criteria

% Value

1: Unsatisfactory

2: Insufficient

3: Approaching

4: Acceptable

5: Target

Why was this score determined for your peer’s essay? What evidence/examples do you have for this score?

% Scaling

84%

0%

65%

75%

85%

100%


Content – 70%


Evidence/Informed Position
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