UW Bothell Personal Statement

i want to have the personal statement before 1/25/14. i need to write a personal statement for University of Washington Bothell. I am applying for the computer science major and 2 page with 550words. i will upload the personal statement prompt and some personal information. you can change the information or rewrite it as long as it work or best for the personal statement.

Personal Statement
Your Personal Statement is an opportunity to introduce yourself to the admissions committee and provides context for the rest of your application The statement is very personal and belongs to you alone. Write what you feel strongly about and what matters most to you-not to your friends, parents, or colleagues. In other words, we invite you to distinguish yourself through telling your story.
Transfer Applicant Prompt
What is your intended major, and how did your interest in this subject evolve'? Describe any relevant experience you have had in the field (employment, internships, military service, volunteer work, campus or civic activities, etc.) and what you have gained from your involvement. How will UW Bothell prepare you for your future endeavors'?

At the age of 13 my family moves to the United States of America. For the first two years I attend to an ESL school to improve my language then transfer to Hamiton Middle school and Rossevelt High school. English is not my first language this is why I felt really hard to adapt, make friends and learn at school, but by the time past I have made much improvement I volunteer for Wilderness Inner-city Leadership Development (WILD) which is a place where I can learn about the enviroment, grow as a leader, and make a positive change; this organization also allows me to help the elders who live in china town by teching them english, helping them in their daily life activity. Now I work for a Taiwanese restaurant where I force me to communicate more in English. My parents have not attended to college, so they have a high expectation on me and my brother. I love working with technology related materials.my main goal is to create a new program that will benefit the society; I will like to used my knowledge to facilitate others people life....